Saturday spankings is a blog hop where authors share eight sentences of spanking fiction. This week I’m sharing a scene from My House, My Rules. In this scene, Jay is giving Alex her first spanking after he catches her pleasuring herself out in the open. The scene is lighthearted and I wish I could share more but as it is I’ve gone over as usual…sorry.
Jay settled Alex into the perfect position for her
spanking. There was an element of doubt in the back of his mind as he
raised his hand. There were kids in the house, but what the hell, he
was human. He'd been thinking about doing exactly this all day. With
that the decision was made and he brought his hand down hard, first
on one cheek and then on the other.
“OW! What the fuck??!” she yelped. “That hurt!”
“Spanking's
are supposed to hurt.” he said, not breaking his pace.
“But,
it's harder…”
“Harder than what Alex?” he asked, his hand still bouncing off her panty clad bottom.
She was too embarrassed to answer, and she took deep breath to work through the burning that was building by the second. If her kids weren't upstairs she would have yelled.
“Harder than you imagined while you pleasured yourself?” His hand smacked harder and faster as she squirmed, not wanting to answer.“Tell me.” he said, pausing long enough to raise her night shirt.
Alex tried hard to squeeze her legs together, to keep
this man from seeing the tell tale wetness on her panties.
“Tell
me Alex.” he whispered. “You like it don't you?” His fingers
were hooked in her underwear and he was about to take them down.
“Yes.” she panted. “I like it.”
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Ahh, the great out of doors. *grins* Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Thianna! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteOops, guess Alex needs to be a bit more circumspect, or Jay isn't holding up his part of the bargain. Great snippet, Connie. I loved it, too.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Kathryn! Thanks :)
DeleteIf anyone deserved a spanking it was Alex. She was out of control.
ReplyDeleteShe was a little out of control lol. She met the right man at the right time. Thanks Cara :)
Delete"Hard" lessons but as we come to your finale in this snippet, with the underwear about to vanish she finally admits "Yes, I Like It." Lots of emotion and that hint of eros in the admitting leaves Alex now and the reader wanting more...
ReplyDeleteMore coming next week Joseph! Glad you liked it. THanks :)
DeleteWell....well...well, she likes it! Very nicely done snippet.
ReplyDeleteYes she does. Glad you liked it Minelle :)
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ReplyDeleteOh I love that! So great that he knows she likes it and she admits it!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Renee :)
DeleteOf course she likes it. This sounds hot.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rollin. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteThere seems to be a theme this weekend of spanking supposed to hurt. :) And I admit that it made me laugh. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteLOL. I thought that too! I guess it isn’t such a novel idea that spankings hurt. Who would have thought? Thanks Ana :)
DeleteI sometimes wonder why our heroines are so embarrassed by being turned on by spankings. But it's very real. Nicely done, Constance.
ReplyDeleteYes I wondered that but they still seem to be at first, my characters have a mind of their own. lol.Thanks Patricia.
DeleteThe moment we admit to liking it... always a pivotal point. Very moving moment between the two. So sweet - you know, in a spanking way.
ReplyDeleteIn a spanking way lol. THanks Palomoa :)
ReplyDeleteOh, this is hot!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sue. So glad you liked it :)
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