Saturday Spanking…Come and join in the fun
Saturday Spanking bloggers post eight sentences of spanking fiction. Today I’m continuing from where I left off last week with Double Trouble, the sequel to my first novella Becky’s Last Chance.
The enormity of the situation hit him and he couldn't help himself
any longer. He pulled her over his knee and brought his hand down
several times on each cheek leaving angry red handprints. “This is
NOT about the car. I didn't want you to touch it because I thought
you might struggle with it and have an accident. It was YOU I was
concerned about. His hand bounced off her naked bottom over and over
flattening each naked cheek with each hard spank.
Becky sobbed pathetically and clung to his jeans.
“I'm
sor...ry. It won't ever hap...pen ag...ain.” Becky sobbed.
“Shhh.
I know. It certainly won't EVER happen again.”
Don't think this is
your real spanking, Ryan thought as his slapped each very hot cheek.
Her ass was red and scorching and he knew she'd had enough. To go on
with at least. He helped her stand and then pulled her into his arms,
clinging to her for grim death while she tried to get her crying
under control.“I
promise.”
“Look,
you need to eat and Mike and Kendall are still downstairs. We'll deal
with this after they've gone home.” He said.
Becky's head popped up
from her husband's chest. “Didn't
we just already deal with it?” Becky asked hopefully.
Ryan chuckled. “A few hand smacks for your best weekends worth of
work yet? Not even close.”
Becky sighed. It was on the tip of her tongue to tell him she didn't
want the brush or the bath brush, but she knew that would make the
items the top of his list, so she decided to cut her losses and just
be quiet, besides, she DID need to eat and even though she hated
admit it, she deserved everything she got.
It won't happen again ;)
ReplyDeleteWell THAT won’t happen again lol. I think there’ll always be something.Thanks Kelli :)
DeleteLove <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Corinne. I’m glad you liked it :)
DeleteSounds like Becky may be hoping for this night's guest to stay the night so to speak. And now the anticipation of the continued discipline and spanking and the hidden humiliation before the guests. Lovely snippet leaving us with wanting more.
ReplyDeleteI bet she is. Glad your still wanting more Joseph. Thank you :)
DeleteLater's gonna hurt... Way to up the anticipation!
ReplyDeleteYep later probably is gonna hurt lol Thanks Normandie :)
DeleteI really like Ryan and Becky! Do you think you'll write more books about them?
ReplyDeleteI’m glad you like them Lynn. It’s always a possibility. Thanks :)
ReplyDeleteHmm, punishment not over yet. I'm squirming in my seat. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteNope not yet. THanks Mary :)
DeleteAs foolish as it is, we can't help hoping/asking for leniency even when we know it's not going to happen. Though I think that she got off far too lightly! It was a serious mistake.
ReplyDeleteIt was a serious mistake and her punishment isn’t over yet. That was just a bit of stress relief…for him lol . Thanks Ana :)
Delete"Didn't we just deal with it?"---that made me laugh!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it! Thanks Celeste :)
DeleteHe sounds oh so stern! Great excerpt:)
ReplyDeleteYes he can be. Thnaks Sue :)
DeleteOoh the brush or the bath brush? I wonder which it will be...
ReplyDeleteYOu know I can’t even remember lol. Guess we’ll both find out next week ! Thanks Renee :)
DeleteNow she has all evening to worry about it. And he'll be thinking about it too. Should create quite a bit of tension. Nice.
ReplyDeleteYep, I think the waiting sometimes is worse than the punishment…no probably not but it’s not pleasant. Thanks Cara :)
ReplyDeleteHot spanking and lovely conflict within Becky... she wants it but doesn't want it; she knows deep down that she deserves it. Love that kind of thing!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Penny. I’m glad you liked it :)
DeleteI love this excerpt-the inner turmoil we feel waiting for a spanking and realizing we probably do deserve it!
ReplyDeleteAlways trying to get out of it but being disappointed if you do? Thanks Breanna :)
DeletePoor Becky...although... :) Good work, Constance!
ReplyDeleteThanks Patricia. Even I don’t have much sympathy for Becky at this point. She deserves everything she gets lol. :)
DeletePoor Becky seems conflicted... she knows she deserves it but... hmmm... love those types of dilemmas (in a story ;))
ReplyDeleteYes, in a story it’s fun lol Thanks Paloma :)
DeleteShe needs to learn a really good lesson. Then maybe she won't be so defiant.
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