Saturday Spanking bloggers post eight sentences of spanking fiction. Today I’m continuing from where I left off last week with Double Trouble, the sequel to my first novella Becky’s Last Chance.
In this scene Becky is awaiting her real punishment.
Ryan crept into the room in his bare feet. He didn't want her to
notice him. He watched her do her usual nervous dance. She was
shuffling and fiddling with her hair. He had known her at times, to
try and get away with touching herself while she waited. Sometimes it
had taken all of his strength to stop her. She'd looked so beautiful
standing there naked, running the tips of her pretty manicured
fingers down her flat belly to touch between her legs. He did stop
her though, if it was punishment. He didn't have to stop her from
touching herself this time. This time, she was truly nervous, she was
in BIG trouble and she knew it.
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You're such a tease! LOL We keep getting closer and closer to her punishment, but it is always around the bend;) Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteActually Thianna. I was going to make this the last one from this book but I thought that might be mean lol. Glad I still have your interest :)
DeleteSometimes, we go so far over the line that even we recognize it. Sounds like Miss Naughty Becky has finally realized it herself.
ReplyDeleteThat she has. Doesn’t make the waiting any easier though does it? Thanks Ana :)
DeleteI agree with Ana, although I think naughty Miss Becky realized it the moment even before she saw Ryan's face. Yup. This is one punishment she knows she deserves and she really doesn't want. I'm really enjoying these snippets from Double Trouble, Connie.
ReplyDeleteYou’re right Kathryn. I think she knew as soon as she sobered up that she had gone way, way too far. I’m pleased you’re still liking this story :)
ReplyDeleteHer nervousness reveals she knows she did wrong. Like the detail there.
ReplyDeleteWhy does Ryan sneak up on her?
I think he wants to see how seriously she’s taking this. He wants to know that she knows how serious what she’s done is. Thanks Cara :)
DeleteOh boy is she in trouble. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary . Glad you liked it :)
DeleteGirls will be girls...naughty...
ReplyDeleteAnd then they get spanked…lol Thanks Kelli :)
DeleteThe anticipation is building!
ReplyDeleteFor Becky too I think . Thanks Normandie :)
Deletegreat snippet, Constance. I can't wait to hear what happens next.
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Thanks Katherine :)
DeleteYes! I liked the "nervous dance" too. Good evocative language. I think I've DONE that dance, heheh. Yep. I have. :)
ReplyDeleteLOL Sheri. Glad you liked it :)
Deleteooh la la. I love that she's touching herself because she's nervous...
ReplyDeleteTHanks Renee. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteSuper sexy cover there. I like it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Louisa :)
DeleteShe's such a scamp, but I'm afraid she's going to regret being so naughty. It wouldn't be a Constance Masters book if she didn't get her comeuppance. Lovely teaser!
ReplyDeleteYes I’m sure she will lol. Thanks Patricia :)
ReplyDeleteYou left us hanging... what a great tease you are! ;)
ReplyDeleteSorry about that Paloma… getting there lol Thanks :)
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