An Unexpected Nanny

Saturday, March 9, 2013

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Saturday Spankings Time Again!






If you haven’t joined us before, the idea of Saturday Spankings is for each blog to post eight sentences or less of their spanking fiction for your enjoyment.

For the last couple of weeks my eight sentences have been from Double Trouble, the sequel to my first novella Becky’s Last Chance. I’m going to continue that this week. 









I can explain.” Becky said. She really wanted to tell him about his new car before they got home but he was having none of it. He took the bottle of water that Mike held out for him and passed it to her.
Drink, there'll be time to explain later.”
But...”
But nothing.” Ryan said. “Look at the state the two of you are in, and you were wandering the street like that. You need to get home and eat something and have some tea and a shower. Then we'll talk and believe me I will be all ears.”

Becky sipped the water and resisted the urge to keep pushing. Instead she curled into the crook of Ryan's welcoming arm and absorbed the feeling of safety and warmth that he always gave her.



If you think this is all taking too long to get to the spanking part let me know and I’ll post an excerpt tomorrow. I don’t want to go over the eight sentences. I could skip bits but then it wouldn’t make sense…maybe





20 comments:

  1. All ears...if only she were so lucky! All ears means no hands for spanking or holding implements.

    And there's always an "explanation", isn't there? :D

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    1. LOL Ana. Lucky indeed if he was all hands! The explanation is a bit mute anyway, it’s obvious they’ve been up to no good :)

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  2. Yes, there's always an explanation, Anastasia! Good point. Lol.

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    1. Thanks for commenting Normandie. Nice to see you here :)

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  3. I love that he's taking good care of her first and foremost.

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    1. Thanks Renee :) I think without showing that caring side he would just come off as mean.

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  4. Definitely love the care he's giving her. I think that's so important in relationships and it's often overlooked in spanking books. You're not taking too long at all. I'm really enjoying this.

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    1. Thanks Kathryn. Glad your liking it still :)

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  5. It is just as important to have pre-care as after-care in a relationship like this. By waiting, you have in place a mutual understanding and flavor for proper consequence and mutual acceptance as to the pending action to be taken... I like that the Dominant is the one prescribing this here...

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    1. Thanks Joseph. I don’t like uncaring Dominants. Glad you liked it :)

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  6. Like the tenderness in this scene, the security she feels.

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  7. Nice extract! As others have said, the sense of care is really powerful and this is an important contextualising element: it situates any punishment-to-come within the context of a loving relationship and gives it meaning.

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  8. Thank you Penelope. I wanted everyonbe to know that they loved and trusted each other :)

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  9. He's very thoughtful, especially considering what he's seen so far. A lot of guys would be pretty ticked off and react before the whole story was told. Good work, Constance!

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  10. I’d like to think he comes across as nice. He isn’t a saint but he’s nice. Thanks Trish :)

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  11. Christopher Petersen recommended your blog....he has great tastes so I just added myself to your follow list *s*. Have a great night...

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