I've been called out for the look challenge by Renee Rose. The challenge is to find the word LOOK in your current work in progress and then post the sentences around it. Choose your three favourite LOOKS to post.
I've chosen my work in progress 'My House My Rules'.
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“I
agree.” he said surprising her. Her smile was pretty, he thought,
even if it wasn't real. “LOOK, I'm not an ogre.” He sighed. He did
want to reach some kind of resolution, he wanted to get to know her
better. There was a certain vulnerability in her eyes that he was
drawn to. “I don't even know what yours or
the boy's names are.”
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Alex
really wanted to tell him to shove his pool, but she didn't. To do so
would mean depriving her kids and she would never do that. There was
also the fact that he was very good LOOKING and there was something
very attractive about his bossy persona. “Ok and thank you.” she
said. And will you be there too? She wanted to ask.
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Now for
the difficult part. It would be hard enough to draw a heart upside
down on a piece of paper with a pencil. Trying to shave a heart in
overgrown pubic hair that was gummed up with shaving cream, was like
trying to mow a heart with a lawn mower on a snowy mountain.
Impossible. How were you supposed to see what you were doing anyway.
Alex wiped of the cream to have a look at her efforts and sighed.
That was the saddest LOOKING heart she'd ever seen. It would detract
from her wide ass maybe, but not in a good way. Another handful of
shaving cream and a new razor and she was finally squeaky clean.
She'd forgotten how good it felt to be so free.
OK there's mine.... I'm calling out
Korey Johnson
Starla Kaye
Sue Lyndon
I took up the challenge with my current work Rose's Cowboys on my website. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks Starla, ooh I'll go and take a peak and see what's coming :)
DeleteOOoh I love the previews. Especially the last one! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Adaline, I'm glad you like them :)
Deletegreat excerpts:) Thanks for calling me out! I'm definitely going to participate sometime this week:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sue, I'm looking forward to taking a LOOK :)
DeleteYes the last one is so great - a lawn mower- ha!! Great previews!
ReplyDeleteThanks Renee! :)
ReplyDeleteThe last excerpt is a hoot! Enjoyed them all.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cara !:)
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