We’re back! Time again for Saturday Spankings! This week I’m doing an excerpt from my new release The Grass Could Be Greener. No date yet but out sometime in June. In this excerpt Jamie has not long been in her new home and is reading through the diary left for her by the other Mom. It is quite an eye opener when she realises that this life is going to be very different to her own. I may have gone over the eight sentences, well no I did go over the eight sentences. Sorry...
Jamie returned to the diary, flipping a page and rolling her eyes as
she read the first line.
This is a traditional home.
Her eyes widened with
every sentence.
As such Joe is the head of our home. He has the final say in all things.
“No!” she said. “In ALL
things?!”
Our children are
expected to follow the household rules or face the consequences.
These vary from sitting in the consequences chair to much harsher
punishments: Losing their Saturday night television privileges, doing
extra yard work or cleaning the bathrooms. I have written a list but
Joe will decide on which punishment is suitable for the crime.
Jamie was shocked but like a passerby gawking at a road crash, she
found she couldn't stop reading.
Joe is the head of
our marriage as well as our home. He has simple rules and he expects
me to follow them. If I break a rule, Joe will discuss it with me but
ultimately if he decides that I need punishment he will punish me.
“Um...how?”
she said shaking her head at the ridiculousness of this man. “All
the chores are hers anyway!”
Occasionally there will be an unusual punishment that Joe decides fits the crime but mostly if I break a rule I get spanked.
“SPANKED?!”
she practically shouted. “He spanks her!?”
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Talk about culture shock! I occasionally watch "Wife Swap" and this idea really intrigues me. You'll definitely have to let us know when it's available. Great snippet. And yeah, you went over, but not as much as some of our other participants this week. So, you get a pass.
ReplyDeleteIt sure was lol. Thanks Kathryn :)
DeleteI always read the excerpt first then the blurb. In this case, I had to quickly run up and read that blurb! Are we talking Wife Swap???
ReplyDeleteI forgot about the blurb. I’ll try and put it up when I get back. Yes it’s Wife Swap :) Thanks Natasha :)
DeleteGreat snippet and book idea, Constance. Thanks for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sheri! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteI love this concept so much, I wish I had thought of it. Email me when it comes out, so I don't forget. I want this one!!!
ReplyDeleteI’ll be happy to email you when it comes out! I think there’s a lot of reality shows just begging to be written into spanking stories. Thanks Cara :)
DeleteWow...looking forward to reading this one!
ReplyDeleteTHanks Sue! I’m so glad that you liked it :)
DeleteThis is cute. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dalzie! I’m happy that you thought so :)
DeleteI love this concept. And I love the wife's reactions reading the diary! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI guess you would be a bit shocked lol. Thanks Casey, glad you liked it ;)
DeleteI'm giggling at Jamie's reaction. She has no idea of what's in store for her! Truly an awesome setup, Constance. I love how she finds out about spanking and punishment in just bits and pieces as she reads along. It's wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Alice! I’m so pleased that you liked it. I had fun writing this book :)
DeleteI like this snippet. Great concept. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Addy! Glad you liked it :)
Deletelol...this is so cute! I love your idea, and I love the reactions.
ReplyDeleteUh oh is exactly right lol. Thanks Kelli :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ana! It is such a culture shock to her to be in this home lol :)
ReplyDeleteSQUIRMING!! what an incredible premise for a story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Renee! I’m so happy you liked it :)
DeleteSounds like this is going to be a good one! Poor Jamie's in for a surprise! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary! So pleased you liked it :)
DeleteI just pinned some of your books on my pinterest, this one is a good one
ReplyDeleteThanks Blondie! That’s a great complimenty. Glad you liked my snippet :)
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