Today for my spanking excerpt I’m choosing something out of one my new WIP so no blurb yet. This is from a story tentatively titled 'The Grass Could Be Greener'. This story is a take on one of the television programs where two wives swap families and lives for two weeks. One of the couples, Sarah and Joe live in a domestic discipline relationship. This scene is where Sarah starts to worry a bit about her husband maybe spanking the new wife. He decides to put her mind to rest by showing her the difference.
Each word was punctuated with a smack that made her eyes blink and
her pussy twitch wantonly. She didn't know if it was Joe's bossy
voice or the spanking itself but draped over his knee getting spanked
soundly always made her want him. None of that changed the fact that
her behind was sizzling.
“I get it!” she wailed. “You
can stop now!”
“No, I have to make sure.” he
said, his hand still bouncing off her bottom.“THAT'S how I would
spank a stranger."
Suddenly the spanks stopped and Sarah sucked in a cleansing breath.
Her relief was short lived though as her pyjamas headed south.
“But you're finished.” she said trying to turn around but a large
hand pressed her back down and remained on the small of her back.
“Not yet.” he said. “You're my
wife.”
“Ow.” she cried “I know.”
“I'm not sure that you do.” he
said. “You're my real wife.” His hand bounced off her now very
pink and naked bottom although they had slowed a little to a steady
pace.
“Ok.” she sniffled.
“You're the only wife I will ever
spank like this.” His slapped her bottom hard and low across both
quivering cheeks.
“I believe you.” Those were the
words he appeared to be waiting for because he stopped. She sighed
with pleasure as the hand that had punished now rubbed out the sting.
“Ahhh.” she breathed with contentment as Joe slipped a finger
between her cheeks.
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Hmm. Sounds like Joe wouldn't think of spanking another woman on the bare, but I get the feeling he's not opposed to spanking his two week "wife" if he feels she needs it. I love your premise, Connie. Very intriguing and rife with potential complications. I look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathryn. Glad you liked my snippet :)
DeleteI love the idea. I watch that show on TV myself. I like the spanking aspect, but I'm curious to see where you go with the sexual aspect, the touching. I do think you need a racier title. Very intriguing concept, though. You hooked me immediately.
ReplyDeleteHmmm, a racier title. I’ll have to have a think. Glad you like the concept, I Iove reality tv which is what made me think of it. Thanks Cara :)
DeleteBelief stopped the spanking: interesting, and delicious. I may have spanked her a few more times, just to be sure. ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Alice, glad you liked it :)
DeleteI wonder if that other wife knows what she's signing up for? I don't blame Sarah for not wanting her husband to spank someone else. This is a cute idea for a story!
ReplyDeleteThanks Casey. I’m glad you like the idea :)
DeleteI know I wouldn't want my hubs spanking another woman even if it's just for punishment. I think Joe's going to have his hands full with Sarah. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary. Glad you like it :)
DeleteI love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Angie :)
DeleteLOL. I'm thinking that a part of her almost wishes that she weren't quite such a *real* wife with a real behind with a real sting. :D I like the humor in your stories and the way the reader can step back from the mischief. I usually shake my head at how your characters get themselves into such naughty predicaments...and feel slightly superior. lol...;)
ReplyDeleteGlad my stories make you feel superior Ana LOL I’m glad you get the humour. Thanks :)
DeleteAw, what a great set up for a story!!!! Can't wait to read it !
ReplyDeleteThanks Renee! :)
DeleteVery interesting story idea. Love this scene.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sue! Glad you like it :)
DeleteShe's sure learned that she shouldn't have doubted him in the first place. This snippet really touches on issues we all have from time to time. My husband has spanked strangers in front of me, and while it felt weird, I'm not the jealous type so it didn't make me angry. So long as I'm his special spankee, that's good enough for me. :)
ReplyDeleteI don’t know how I would feel. I think having your husband san k someone else in front of you is one thing but it might be harder if you were going away and leaving another woman in your house for two weeks. I guess that’s where trust comes in doesn’t it. Thanks Trish :)
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