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Monkey Business


Summer sat on the log exactly where she'd been dumped unceremoniously and tried not to breath. She wasn't sure what to do but she knew that her best chance of survival was to do as little as possible and not make eye contact. Wasn't that what the rules said? That and definitely don't smile. No fear of that. There was absolutely nothing funny about this. How in the hell had she landed herself in this mess? He was staring at her. She wanted to run, to escape somehow but she knew that running would only put her in even more danger. His head tilted as his hard and piercing eyes held her in her place. At this stage she wasn't sure what he wanted to do with her, she wasn't sure that he was either. Why the hell had she been late? Again. If only she could turn back the clock...




Summer jumped out of bed. How the hell had she slept in again? Ben was going to be ropeable. He'd torn strips off her on Monday when she'd been late and she'd vowed that it would never happen again. Right. It wasn't her fault was it? Maybe just a little.


Summer knew she shouldn't have gone clubbing last night but her friend had made her feel terrible. Polly had gone on and on about her ruining their summer with this stupid internship thingy as she called it. She didn't have even a summer job and she didn't understand that Summer HAD to do this. She needed to bank up some volunteer hours for her classes. So she'd gone out and now she was going to cop it from Ben, the supervisor in charge of the summer volunteers program. Ben had told her in no uncertain terms, no excuses. He said she was lazy and easily distracted, that she didn't appreciate the position that lots of college students would have gladly had. He said that she was spoiled and in need of a damn good spanking to wake her up not just in the morning but to the realities of life.


Once out of the shower, she'd torn up the street to the bus stop only to see the bus driving away.
Fuck.” she said to no one. “Could this morning get any worse?”


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After waiting for the next bus Summer finally got to her job an hour late. She stood outside Ben's small office panting. The door was locked. There was a post-it stuck on there with her name on the top. Summer held her breath while she read it, half expecting it to be a note saying her services would no longer be needed. Thankfully that wasn't the case.


Summer,
You're late! Again! I didn't have time to wait around so I've left you a list of things to start on at the front desk. Please don't deviate from this list.

Ben
PS. we are going to talk about this young lady.


Summer was breathing a little easier when she knew she didn't have to have him yell at her just yet. She could do a list. No problem.


She winced as collected the list from the front office. All the shit jobs. Great. Oh well, someone had to do it.




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By the time she got the the last job on the list Summer had had it. She was tired and cranky. This was so unfair. How was any of this menial work supposed to help her learn anything anyway? Shouldn't she be seeing hands on what it would be like to do this job for real? Summer knew she was no idiot. She'd read all the stuff they gave her when she started. She knew all the right and wrong ways of doing all this stuff. Dammit she was going to get a closer look at this place and all that went on here.


She looked through the pane of thick wide glass. Excellent, it was empty. That would give her time to explore. To see how these creatures spent their days. How their minds ticked. Their minds weren't the only things ticking though, time was ticking and she had to hurry if she was going to have enough time to explore. Ben would no doubt be looking for he before long. The nineteen year old co ed could hear sounds far to the left of her. Yes. Now or never. She clicked open the heavy door and stepped tentatively into the wide space. It was fascinating. Much larger than she had first suspected. It was so real...


Just as she was adjusting to her surroundings she heard a sound. No more than a crackle of like a small stick snapping. She screamed as her feet left the ground. Only briefly. She realised the dire straights she was in and jammed her mouth shut so tight she almost put her teeth through her lip. Inside she was quaking, terrified. There was a heart beating loudly, it's rhythmic thump making it difficult for her to think. Was it hers or his? She tried to remember what she'd been taught but her mind wasn't cooperating with her. All her senses were on hyper alert, crowding what was left of her thinking process.


Flashes of green and brown sparked across her line of vision. Longish soft black hair brushed against her hot skin as a strong arm held her in a carry stance under his arm. There was rustling and cracking noises and the smell was bad...wafting up through her nostrils and burning her sinuses. Oh God she was going to sneeze. It took everything in her to control her sneeze, that and the scream that was dying to escape. Tears coursed down her cheeks and her mouth opened in a desperate hunt for air. She could taste the saltiness of her own blood on the edge of her tongue.


Her eyes opened wide as she was swung around and then plonked onto a large log.


Summer held her breath. Think, think she demanded. Her useless brain gave her nothing. Her eyes were trained to the ground but she could feel the hot breath of the large male gorilla as he circled her, sniffing her, every now and then poking her before pacing away and roaring, thumping his chest. She had a feeling it wasn't just for dramatic effect.


Her breath was loud in her ears, even though she was only allowing it to filter through her lips in short whispery spurts. Was that a noise? Char obviously heard it to because he turned suspiciously and eyed the door of his inside enclosure. He sniffed and then trudged towards it excitedly. When Char's back was completely facing her she dared to look. Ben was in the doorway holding up one of the large frozen fruit treats they'd made the day before. Thank God. He wasn't going to be happy with her but at least she'd live to hear the lecture. Ben moved outside the doorway now and as Char got closer he threw the treat inside. The Gorilla glared at him, unimpressed that he was being forced to go inside to get the cold delicacy but he went, it was after all food and yummy food at that.


Ben slid the gates down, locked them and then turned around slowly fixing her with a glare that made her squirm.


Summer tried to let out the breath she felt like she'd been holding for hours but it caught in her throat. There was another predator on the loose and this one had fire in his eyes and steam coming out of his ears.
I know this looks really bad.”
Bad? It looks INSANE.” he yelled loudly as he got closer. “Of all the stupid, hair brained schemes...”
I'm ok.” Summer tried to say feebly. Even she could recognise that he hadn't said a word that wasn't true. For some reason her ridiculous mouth had it's own ideas. “I didn't know he was in there.” She tried to pull out of his from grasp as he bent and took her arm.
Seriously? You think that makes it ok? You could have been killed!”
I was just figuring out a plan to get out.” she squealed as he threw her over his shoulder about as gently as Char had tucked her under his arm. Not very.
Oh for the love of God I don't think I've EVER met a more irritating brat!” He slapped her bottom hard and ducked in through the entrance she'd used to get into the enclosure in the first place, leaving the sprinkling of spectators that had just arrived cheering. They weren't Gorillas but they were entertaining.


Ben continued to lecture her all the way back to his office, every now and then slapping her bottom as punctuation when he'd made a particularly important point.
Put me down Ben!” she hissed. “People are watching.”
You wanna be put down?” he asked. “I'll put you down alright but you have to pick the place. If I put you down in my office you're going over my knee for spanking.”
You can't spank me! That's archaic! This is a zoo not a museum!”
Fine. Your choice. I'll put you down outside the gate and you can go on your merry way but you won't be coming back. I won't be responsible for your antics anymore.” He changed directions and marched towards the employees exit.
Wait! I can't afford to leave here. I need these hours.”
Are you sure?”
Yes I need them before school goes back in the fall.”
Ok. My office it is.”
Wait! Can't we just work something out?”
We just did.”


***



Ben dropped her to her feet. “Take off your coveralls.” he said.
Summer's eyes widened. “I only have my T-shirt under here and my panties.”
More than you're going to need.” He locked the door.
Summer undid the buttons, fumbling in her embarrassment as her skimpy T-shirt came into view. If she'd known how the day was going to unfold she would have chosen a longer one. She wriggled out of her clothes and dropped them over the chair, tugging at her t-shirt to try and cover herself.


Ben sat on the edge of his desk. “I'm disappointed in you Summer.”
It felt worse to hear those words in a calmer tone than when he was shouting them at her. “I didn't mean it to all go wrong.”
I know that but you don't listen. You think that the rules don't apply to you or you think you know better.”
I was just..”
Nope.” he said putting his hand up. “No more of that. Absolutely no more excuses. You're on notice. If you're late. If you don't follow instructions, if you go anywhere near the animals when I'm not with you or if you speak back...I will spank you and I will spank you hard. Do you understand?”
She nodded, wide eyed and nervous as she listened to his serious tone.
Good. Now we're getting somewhere.” He yanked her arm and she toppled over his knee.
Ow!” She squeaked as he spanked her already tender flesh through her lacy panties. “I'm sore! I was dropped on a log and then you kept smacking me!
He ignored her complaints and and continued to warm her wriggling bottom. “You are a very intelligent girl.” he said punctuating each word with a hard spank. “One of the best I've ever had sent to me.”
Your reward system sucks!” she shouted,immediately regretting her words as a cool breeze floated across her now totally naked cheeks. “I didn't....OW...mean it!”
I want you to apply yourself as hard as I'm applying my hand!”
Ok, ok.”
Got it?”
I got it.”
Good.”



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107 comments:

  1. Loved this story Constance! You had me going at the beginning!

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    1. Thank you Minelle! I’m glad you liked it :)

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  2. I don't see a question to answer.... I like that Ben saved Summer from the enclosure.
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    1. Thanks Addy! I didn’t do a question this time :)

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    1. Thank you Tricia! I’m glad you enjoyed it :)

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  4. What a fun story! I like Ben, he's my kind of guy.

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    1. Thanks Casey! I think Ben might be my kind of guy too :)

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  5. Loved this story. Very nice and such a different setting.





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    1. Thanks Sunny girl! I’m glad that you liked it :)

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  6. I really enjoyed it Constance... very imaginative, and great action sequence in the gorilla cage. P.S. I like Summer...she's spunky!

    Bad Penny

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    1. Thanks Penny. I’m glad you like Summer. It’s hard to write action I realised lol.

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  7. Loved this so much!!! I can't wait to read more!!

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    1. THanks Corinne! It was only a short story but I guess I could think about continuing it. You’ve got me thinking :)

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  8. Sassy Summer's going to keep Ben on his toes! Loved it, Constance:)

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  9. Fun story! Monkey Business indeed!

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    1. Pardon the pun lol. Thanks! I’m glad you liked it :)

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  10. A great story! Enjoyed it a lot:)

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  11. A good story with lots of possible future situations

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    1. Thanks Alan! I may have to think about that :)

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  12. Enjoyed the short story!
    angiek@cfu.net

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  13. Super story. I like Ben's character. Thanks.

    Love,
    Ronnie
    xx

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    1. Glad you liked Ben and my story. Thanks Ronnie :)

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  14. I actually thought she was going to be bent over the log! A very good short story and an interesting scenario!

    Hugs

    Ami

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    1. Hmm. I wish I’d thought of that! Glad you liked it Ami. Thanks :)

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  15. She is a brat but I am sure he can handle it. I am looking forward to her learning from her mistakes, we all made them in our youth.

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    1. Yes we did. Although I never came face to face with a gorilla lol Thanks Book Swagger :)

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    2. I know right, but there is a joke about a man who could not find a job, a zoo was hiring so he applied, they wanted him to play a gorilla since they did not have one. Well the man became very good at it, he would hee hee, eat bananas and climb the trees. One day he fell in the area next to his, it was a lion pen. He started screaming help, help. The lion was growling and pawing the ground. Then the lion growled and said shh, shh you are going to get us both fired. So maybe she thought the gorilla was a human! lol.

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  16. Ha ha! What a great scenario!

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  17. Just love Summer's character and her zeal and zest... A great build up and sensual character development too... and I love the application of the hand and Summer's character at the end...

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    1. Thanks som much Joseph. I’m happy that you enjoyed it :)

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  18. Man- that was just not enough! I'm going to have to hurry over to get the rest of this one. Great story line, I loved it.

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    1. Thanks Pooky! Unfortunately this was just a short story. I am thinking though, that I might be able to continue it :)

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  19. Hmm, bratty lazy girl who is disciplined by her boss - sexual harassment fun at work! ^_^

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    1. Nothing like a little sexual harassment at work to liven things up lol. Thank you :)

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  20. Love this! Definitely my kind of story!
    Kaylee Petersheim

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    1. Thank you Kaylee! I’m so happy that you liked my story :)

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  21. Summer seems like the kind of brat to get in way over her head, and Ben seems just the man to take her in hand love it!! Thanks for the snippet can't wait for the release of the book!!!


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    1. Thanks Kelly! This was just planned as a short story but I think I might consider continuing it. :)

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  22. I agree with Kelly. Summer is exactly the kind of brat I love to read about. Great excerpt, Constance. I really enjoyed it.

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  23. Will she apply herself as well as he did? Hmmm. I must needs to find out!

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  24. Ooo, Summer. You are biting off more than you can chew with that man. lol, and yet, something tells me you're going to keep trying.

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    1. I think you could be right there Maren! Thanks :)

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  25. I love a twist! Great excerpt, Constance. I'll be back to read more.

    Irishey

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    1. Thanks Irishey! You may here more from these characters yet :)

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  26. The gorilla surprised me, I wasn't expecting that. Summer is in for a very long summer if she doesn't get her act together. But maybe the spankings will lead to romance. Can't wait for the rest of the story

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  27. I love that she's kind of a spitfire. I look forward to reading more...

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    fiona

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    1. Thanks Fiona. Glad you liked my story and Summer :)

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  28. Ohh a rebellious lass... Thanks

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    1. Thank YOU ! I’m glad you liked Summer :)

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  29. That was so fun and unexpected lol Great! shavro6@gmail.com VIP

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    1. Thanks so much SH. I’m glad you liked it :)

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  30. very fun...the gorilla did surprise me :-)

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    1. Glad you got a surprise! Thanks Terpsichore :)

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  31. Great story! Thanks, Constance!

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  32. Summer is learning not to break rules just because she can. A hard lesson in life!

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    1. Yes it is. One that takes some people longer than others to learn! Thanks Tara :)

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  33. Such a fun story and great characters! Thank you for sharing with us.
    <3 Lily
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    1. Thnk YOU Lily! I’m glad you likled it :)

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  34. Good short story, loved that the setting was at a zoo!
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    1. Thank you Elizabeth! I’m glad you liked my zoo story :)

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  35. Great story and very spankalicious!

    Erzabet

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    1. Thanks Erzabet! I’m so glad you liked it :)

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  36. Cute - unique and unexpected Constance!

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    1. Thanks Natasha! I’m really glad you liked it :)

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  37. What a fun story!
    Great job, Constance!
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    1. THanks Katherine! I’m sop pleased that you liked it :)

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  38. I've spent some time admiring the big silverback gorilla at our local zoo & he is so very strong and often stares back at you in a way that makes your skin crawl....Summer deserved more than one spanking for that!!

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    1. You’re probably right! She should have gotten more than one spanking. I’m sure she’ll earn herself another before long lol. Thanks :)

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  39. Cute story. What a fun little twist.

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  40. This Summer is going to learn quickly or else be quite uncomfortable. There were a few lines here that made me laugh. Your characters are always a bit bratty, aren't they? :)

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    1. She’ll probably be uncomfortable lol. AS for her being a brat…takes one t know one :P Thanks Ana :)

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  41. What a great story!! I loved the suspense and the unexpected ...gorilla. Great job as usual.

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  42. Loved the story!! The gorilla was an unexpected twist.

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    1. Thanks Arleen. I’m glad you got a surprise with the gorilla :)

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  43. I agree with Arleen...the gorilla was a delightful twist.
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    1. So glad you liked it and were surprised with the gorilla! Thanks houston_switch :)

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  44. Even with the title, that's not where I thought it would go. Fun twist!

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    1. Thanks you chickadee! Glad you liked it and got a surprise :)

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  45. Oh you most definitely need to continue these characters in another story...they are great and I love the setting...so different and unique!

    Thanks and blessings,
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  46. THank you Cat! So pleased you liked it. I think I will continue with this :)

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  47. I was wondering what was in the enclosure! Should've known from your title :) That was a fun story!

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  48. Terrific story Constance. I will be visiting your site more often.

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  49. Thanks Joey. I woud love to see you more often :)

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  50. The story is so good! thank you.
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  51. Loved the story. Hoping to see more!
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  52. Thank you Tracey! So pleased you liked it :)

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  53. I loved your story, but I always do.

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  54. I loved your story, but I always do.

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