A Lie Unraveled

Friday, May 17, 2013

Saturday Spankings!



This time for Saturday Spankings I thought I would share another spanking from Double Trouble. This time though it’s Becky herself that needs and wants to be spanked. She can’t stand her step mother and blames her for taking her Daddy away. When her Dad and Tracy (the step mother) come to visit they hope to make things right with Becky before breaking the news that they are expecting a baby. Becky pushes Tracy away at every turn until it all reaches a head. Becky accidentally bumps Tracy who tumbles down the stairs. Although Ryan sees what happened as an accident Becky is filled with guilt and doesn’t know what to do with her emotions.










Ryan got rid of the food that'd been sitting out of the fridge. By the time he'd cleaned up and set about making them a light snack, it'd been nearly an hour. Still no sign of Becky. He decided he better go and check if she'd fallen asleep. He opened their bedroom door and stood there dumbfounded.Becky?” he said. “What's all this?”

He couldn't believe his eyes. Becky was standing in the corner naked and sobbing.  

If he'd sent her there to wait for a spanking she would be shifting nervously from foot to foot while she played with her hair, probably concocting a way to try and talk herself out of a punishment. Not this time. This time she was perfectly still, except for her shoulders that were shaking because she was crying. His eyes were drawn to the bed where she'd laid out an arsenal of implements. He didn't understand, this was not his wife's usual behaviour at all.







14 comments:

  1. Wow, Connie! That's intense. I can imagine how Becky feels and if Tracy loses the baby, she'll feel even worse. However, she clearly knows what she needs and Ryan is the sort of person who will help her in every way he can. Great snippet.

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    1. Your right Kathryn and I think this is the moment that Becky realises that she really needs Ryan to be that person that will hold her accountable. Glad you liked it :)

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    1. So can I. Even though the worst didn’t happen it could have and Becky knows that would have been down to her. Thanks Cara :)

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  3. Good emotion. What an awful situation.

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    1. Thanks Casey. I;m glad you felt the emotion I was trying to portray. :)

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  4. A new dynamic for the usually very naughty Becky. It's nice to see you showing the nuances of their relationship. It's not just brat and get spanked.

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    1. Thanks Ana! Becky is a brat sometimes but she’s young. I was married young and young people playing grown ups often make mistakes. Some of them funny and some not funny at all, like this one. Glad you liked it :)

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  5. Intriguing and a delightful read. There's much depth to these characters, and I like the style of your writing.

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    1. Thanks Alice! I’m glad you like my style :)

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  6. Immediate pull into the scene. Angst galore and I'd love to know the before and after of what has transpired.

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    1. THanks Susan. I’ll post some more next week. Glad you liked it :)

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  7. Realizing that she's done something so dangerous (even by accident) must weigh very heavily on her. You've really conveyed that feeling. Good work, Constance!

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    1. Thanks Patricia. I’m glad you think so :)

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