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Looking
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For the first time ever, the Spanking Fiction Authors’ group is
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Alice
Dark
What kind of spanking do you think you deserve?
*Anastasia
Vitsky
Describe one of the "lesson plans" you would recommend to
Natalie.Prize:
A short-short
story (500-1000 words) describing you or me getting/giving the
spanking of your choice.
Limits negotiated individually. Only one spanking in the story,
please!
*Cara
Bristol
What is your fantasy Halloween costume?Prize:
$10 gift certificate to Amazon or Barnes and Noble (winner's choice)
*Celeste
Jones
If you had magical powers, what would you do first?Prize:
$10 gift certificate to Amazon
Constance
Masters
Who came to the door and caused Jenny’s big lie to come crashing
down around her?*Prize:
$10 gift certificate to Blushing Books
*Emma
K. Gardner
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*Patty
Devlin
Have you ever frozen your tushy off in costume like Cami for your
husband?Prize:
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Renee
Rose
Has your costume ever gotten you into trouble (the good or bad kind?)
*Starla
Kaye
What kind of business does Kareena own?Prize:
Eden Fantasy mask
*Sue
Lyndon
Do you think Tammy deserved extra spanks for attending a Halloween
party panty-less while her husband was out of town?Prize:
$10 gift certificate to Amazon
Rollin Should Sam have left before things got so crazy?
Rollin Should Sam have left before things got so crazy?
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Here is my story…
The Devil Made Me Do It
“Come on!”
Jenny said to her whining sixteen year old daughter as she poured
packets of candy into a large bowl. “Daddy said no. You're
grounded. End of story.”
“It can't be the
end of the story Mom!” Hannah wailed. “Besides, Daddy's working.
He'll never know. I could be back before he even gets home.”
“Hannah, you can
whine and plead all you like but you know that if your father found
out I'd let you go, there'd be hell to pay.”
“There's no WAY
he'll find out! You said yourself he never gets home from these
business dinners until the early hours. Please Mom, if you don't let
me go to this party I'll be a social pariah! My life will be over!”
Hannah's eyes filled with tears that swelled and formed big drops
that balanced precariously on the edge of her long lashes. “Mommy
PLEASE!” The big drops fell and ran slowly down her face, taking
with them trails of mascara.
***
“I'm sorry
honey.” Jenny said. “I know you can't see it right now but there
WILL be other Halloweens and lots more parties. I promise. You can
help me pass out candy to the trick or treaters.”
Jenny sighed and
held her arms out to her daughter as she tried to harden her heart.
Hannah ignored them and stomped off to her room making sure to thump
her feet down on each step as she went. Before she got to the top she
turned and gave her parting shot. “I thought you were different.”
she said dramatically. “I thought you were the cool one. So did my
friends. Won't they be surprised?!”
Jenny jumped when
Hannah's door slammed shut. Maybe they were being too hard on her,
she thought.
***
Phone in hand she
went out onto the patio where she wouldn't be heard. “Mark?” she
said as he answered.
“Hi.” Her
husband could tell by the faltering tone in her voice that she was
about to plead their daughter's case. Again. “Problem?”
“She hates me
Mark. Well she probably hates you more but you're not here so at this
very moment' she hates me.”
“Look, I'm not
changing my mind. Our Hanny is getting out of control. She's broken
the rules over and over. Driving her friend's car without a licensed
driver beside her and getting a ticket, was the last straw.”
“She said she was
sorry.” Jenny said. “I really think she meant it this time.”
“She also said it
was an emergency.” Mark said pinching the bridge of his nose.
“Well to a
sixteen year old girl it probably was.”
“Having to drive
to the mall ALONE, to get more hair dye because Casey didn't buy
enough, is NOT an emergency!”
“But Casey
couldn't go...she already...”
“Stop right
there. I'm not going through all this again. She didn't have to miss
the party. YOU were the one that insisted that she was too old to
spank. We agreed.”
“Sort of.”
Jenny said sullenly.
“We agreed that
she needed to be punished and since you WOULDN'T agree to a proper
punishment, I had to decide. I did and I'm NOT changing my mind.”
“Fine.”
“Yes it is fine.”
he said ignoring the pout in her voice. “Just so you know though, I
can hear your mind ticking from here. If you let her go to the party,
SOMEONE will be getting spanked and it won't be Hanny. It's up to you
to be the adult.”
“Fine.” Jenny
repeated sulkily.
“And don't pout.”
“I'm not.”
“Yes you are. No
one ever died from missing a party you know. Even on Halloween.”
“I better go.”
“I love you.”
Mark said.
“I love you too.”
***
Jenny
looked sadly up the stairs as loud irritating music blared through
the closed door. Where had her happy baby girl gone. They'd always
been so close and now it seemed like they were strangers. She had to
have one more try at fixing this.
“Hanny!”
she shouted over the top of the thumping music.
“Go
away.” Hannah shouted back.
“Please
Hanny. I just want to talk.”
“There's
nothing to say.”
“Oh
Hanny. I hate fighting with you like this.”
Hannah
opened the door but stood there sullenly. Her arms were folded
stubbornly and her eyes were looking anywhere but at her Mom.
Jenny
didn't know what came over her but the words seemed to creep out of
her mouth of their own accord. Maybe it was a ghost of halloween or
something. “If I let you go Hanny you have to promise me you will
NEVER drive by yourself again until you get your license.”
“I promise Mommy! I love you! You're the best Mommy in the whole world!”
“I promise Mommy! I love you! You're the best Mommy in the whole world!”
“And
you have to be back here by midnight.” she said. “Just in case
your Dad gets off a little early.”
“I
will, I promise.”
“What
about a costume?” Jenny asked. She couldn't help it. It was wrong
and she knew it but the look of elation on her daughters face made
her heart leap.
“I'll
get changed when I get there.” Hannah said. “That's half the
fun.”
Jenny
sighed, a little disappointed that she couldn't share in getting her
baby ready. “You're sure that Lianna's parents will be home?”
“Yes
Mom. They will be, I promise.”
“What's
your costume?” Jenny asked.
“A bad
fairy.”
“What
does a bad fairy wear?”
“The
same as a good fairy sort of...only black.”
“OH.
Ok grab your stuff. I'll give you a lift.”
***
Several
hours later Jenny opened a chocolate bar and nibbled on it. The
trick or treaters had finally dwindled and she felt safe to sample
what was left. She loved Halloween and all that went with it. They'd
only been blessed with the one child and she had loved the years that
she'd spent planning a costume and then making it for her little
princess or fairy queen. Even the year she'd insisted on going as a
witch she managed to make her the prettiest little witch on the
block. Jen tried to picture Hanny dressed as a bad fairy. Nope, no
picture came to mind, just a younger Hanny in a pink tutu with
sparkly wings. She was broken out of her reverie by the rumble of her
phone in her pocket.
“Hi
honey.” she said, recognising her husband's ring.
“Hey.
Guess what. We got the account.”
“That's
great!” she said, genuinely happy for him. “So you going to
celebrate?”
“I
sure am.” he said. “I'm going to bring home some chinese food and
spend Halloween with my wife and daughter. We haven't spent nearly
enough family time together lately. Maybe we can talk Hanny into
watching a scary movie with us.”
Jenny
felt cold fear and panic wash right through her.
“Jen?”
he said.
“That's
great.” she managed to squeak out finally. “Really great.”
“You
don't sound like it's great.”
“Um...oh
of course, it's a wonderful...surprise.” she said. “I was just
thinking that Hanny's in such a bad mood, maybe we should just let
her sleep.” Then maybe I can sneak her in later, she thought.
“I
don't think that's such a good idea. We need to connect with her
more. Reopen the lines of communication.”
Fuck,
Jenny thought. “Maybe. When will you be home?”
“Just
have some paperwork to tie up.” he said. “About an hour, I'd
say.”
“ 'Kay
then.” she said. “I'll get everything ready.”
***
She shut
her phone, grabbed her keys and tore out the door. As she drove
towards Lianna's house she dialled Hanny's number. “Come on Hanny,
answer please.” she said to the empty car. Nothing. Finally she
screeched into Lianna's driveway.
“Hi
Katie.” she said when Lianna's Mom answered the door. “I need to
pick up Hannah.”
“Oh
I'm sorry, they aren't here.” Katie said.
“Not
here?” she said in a panic. “Where are they?”
“They
went trick or treating. There was a whole bunch of them. They wanted
to go later, you know in the dark.”
“Oh
God. Do you know which way they went?”
“Not
really. They promised to stay in a three block radius though. They're
sixteen Jen. They can't get into too much trouble on foot.”
“No...but...look
there's no other way to explain this. Hanny is grounded and I wasn't
supposed to let her go. Mark was working late...”
“Oh...and
now he's not?”
“Uh
huh. I need to get Hanny home. Fast.”
“Look,
you go home and try and buy some time. I'll look for the kids and
I'll bring Hanny home.”
“Oh
would you?” Jenny said gratefully. “You're a life saver.”
“No
problem.” Katie said. “Todd would skin me alive if I found out I
undermined him like that.”
You have
no idea, Jen thought. “Thanks. I owe you one.”
***
Jenny
raced through the front door, eternally grateful that they hadn't
been toilet papered. Leaving the house unattended on Halloween wasn't
the smartest move. She raced into the house and glanced at the clock
on the wall before grabbing some plates out of the cabinet and
dumping them on the table. Glasses and silverware followed and
finally some cute pumpkin candles. She'd never set the table so fast
in her life. Her heart was beating ten to the dozen as she dialled
her daughter's number for the tenth time. Still nothing.
Jenny
ripped open her closet and pulled out a costume she'd bought just in
case. It was her only chance. Distraction. If she could convince Mark
that they were better spending some quality time together instead of
forcing a sullen teenager out of her room...it might just work. She
could get him up to the bedroom and sneak Hanny back in. After
pulling on a red leather thong, the harried housewife squeezed
herself into the skin tight red and black sequinned minidress with a
long red tail that was part of her sexy devil costume. She teased her
hair and applied heavy make up with bright red lipstick. Just as the
headband with the devil horns was attached to her hair, the man of
the hour pulled into the driveway. Jenny took the stairs two at a
time, forgetting all about the clothes she'd been wearing with the
phone in her pocket. “Here goes nothing.” she said.
***
Katie
tried to call Jenny's cell for the fifth time but it just kept
ringing. She'd driven up and down every street and there was no sign
of the kids. She didn't know what to do. She'd go around one more
time and then she was going to have to go get her husband to help,
after all it wasn't just Hannah that wasn't accounted for now, it was
every kid at the party. She couldn't believe they'd done this. They
promised!
***
Mark
stood in the doorway, his arms full of cartons of chinese and his
mouth agape.
“Nice.”
he was finally able to choke out. “Very nice.”
“You
like?” Jenny asked him as she posed provocatively from the
stairway.
“Oooh
I like very much.” he said huskily. “But you can't wear that
around Hanny.”
“Hanny
won't be joining us.” Jen said, trying not to lie.
“Oh? I
though we agreed that it would be nice to spend some family time.”
“Yeah,
I know that was the plan, but Hanny's been in a mood all day and she
finally fell asleep. I thought you might like to spend some alone
time with me.” Jenny said, swallowing the lie while she tried to
perfect a sexy pout.
“Maybe
you're right. I got your favourites. I'm starving.” he said
wandering over to the table with the food.
Jenny
blew out a frustrated breath as she followed her husband into the
dining room. Time was of the essence here, Hanny could be back at any
moment. “I'm really not very hungry yet.” she said trying to keep
the panic out of her voice.
“You
ok?” Mark asked.
“Fine.
I just thought we could go upstairs?” she said, striking yet
another sexy pose.
Mark
gathered his wife in his arms and kissed her deeply. “Nothing I'd
like more but honey I really have to eat. I didn't have lunch and I
was so busy trying to push through the deal so I could get home, that
I only picked a little. It won't take long.”
“Ok.”
Jenny said. She started opening the cartons so fast that she nearly
knocked over the candles in the process.
“Careful.”
Mark said. “What's brought this eagerness on? Not that I'm
complaining.”
“Nothing,
I um, I've just missed you lately is all.” That was the truth
wasn't it?
“I've
missed you too.”
Jenny
did her best to swallow some of the food, but she was worried. She
hadn't been able to coax Mark away from his dinner yet but more
worrying than that was why Hanny wasn't home, and why Katie hadn't
rung. Suddenly it dawned on her. Her phone! It was upstairs. “I'll
be right back.” she said pushing her chair back and tearing up the
stairs.
***
Mark sat
back in his chair. Was that red thong under his wife's very short
skirt leather? Suddenly food was the furthest thing from his mind.
Her skirt had ridden up while she was sitting and as she ran off he'd
been treated to a fine view of her virtually naked bottom. The sight
of his wife's still perky round cheeks aways pleased him to say the
least, but framed in that sexy thong...
Unable
to resist Jen in that costume any longer Mark followed her up the
stairs and was just about to enter their bedroom when he heard
muffled voices. Jen was listening to her phone messages. Why was she
was acting strangely? He couldn't quite catch what was being said but
the hair stood up on the back of his neck. Something weird was going
on around here. Before he could get to the bottom of it the front
door bell rang.
***
Jenny
could feel perspiration beading on her forehead as she listened to
each progressively panicky phone message. By the time she got to the
last one, a shiver involuntarily rippled through her and she sunk
onto the bed. “I'm a dead woman.” she said. As she tried to put
together another plan the doorbell rang.
***
“Hannah?”
Mark said squinting at the the person who seemed to be his daughter.
His eyes went from the heavily made up and scantily clad young girl
to the policeman that was standing behind her and then back again to
the girl that was supposed to be asleep upstairs.
“Hi
Daddy.” the girl said sheepishly.
Yep it
was her. The voice was the same, but that was about all. Her long red
curls had been teased out and sprayed with some kind of glitter. Her
eyes were ringed with black eyeliner and dark eyeshadow. That didn't
bother him too much, it was Halloween, but the outfit? Her outfit was
like a fairy dress about four sizes too small....and it was black.
Her legs were covered, well not exactly covered, the were clad in
fishnet stockings with big rips in them...he dreaded to think what
they looked like from behind...and she was taller. The SHOES! Was his
little girl wearing hooker heels?
“What
the hell are you wearing?” he asked finally.
“I'm a
bad fairy. I'm sorry Daddy.” Hannah managed to say before bursting
into tears.
The
policeman coughed. “Because it's Halloween sir there've been no
charges laid.”
“What?”
Mark said. “I'm sorry? Charges. She's grounded. She wasn't even
supposed to go out.” he tried to explain.
“Apparently
she did anyway Sir.” the young cop said. “We picked up Hannah and
a group of her friends as they were defacing a house. Like I said,
it's Halloween and it's been a long night. I suggest you keep a
better eye on your daughter in the future.”
“I...yes
officer...I will.” he said. What else could he say.
He shut
the door and stared at his daughter. “Get upstairs.” he said.
“I'm too upset to even talk to you at the moment. And wash that
stuff off your face!”
***
Jen
watched from the top of the stairs as all of her carefully planned
lies crashed down. She was taken aback by the outfit her daughter was
almost wearing. While she'd tried earlier to picture Hanny's costume,
she didn't dream for one minute that it would be ANYTHING like this.
Suddenly her daughter was running towards her and she couldn't get
away.
“Mother!”
she said her face distorted with disgust.
It
dawned on Jen what she herself had on. What a mess. “Don't you
worry about me young lady, I'm an adult!” she said channeling her
mother at last. If only she'd channeled her earlier and said no to
the damn party. “You better go to your room.”
“Good
idea.” Mark said as he headed up the stairs to join them.
Hannah
ran and shut the door quietly behind her.
***
Jen
winced under her husband's stern glare.
“Seriously?”
he asked in a deadly quiet tone.
“I'm
so sorry.” Jen said.
He
grabbed her arm and marched her into their bedroom and slammed the
door. “What were you thinking?”
“I
wasn't.” she said.
“Did
she sneak out or did she go with your blessing.”
“The
latter.” Jen said. She would never throw her daughter under the bus
to save herself.
“Well
that's it then. I told you what to expect.”
“But
she hated me. Really hated me and the words just slipped out.
Really.”
“Firstly,
she wasn't hating you, she was manipulating you. It worked
apparently.”
“I
know that now.” she said. “That costume was...”
“Inappropriate
to say the least.” he said. “I'm so angry at BOTH of you, but
mostly you.”
“I'm
sorry that I lied.”
“Uh
huh. You will be.” He towed her to the bed and sat down before
upending her over his knee.
“What
are you doing? You can't!”
“I
think what I'm doing is PAINFULLY obvious.”
She
wriggled and squirmed with all of her might in an effort to get off
his knee but to no avail.
His hand
came down with a sharp spank on her right cheek. She sucked in a huge
breath to keep from yelling out. “Stop!” Jen hissed. “Hanny'll
hear!”
Mark
rolled his eyes. “Hmm.” he said grumpily.
His
pause gave her hope that he might grant her a reprieve...not for
long. A line of fire exploded across both quivering cheeks.
“What
the fuck?” she let slip as she did her best to spin around and see
what he was using.
***
“Watch
your mouth!” he grumbled as he swung the end from the plastic
pitchfork across her almost naked bottom. He had to admit that her
naughty costume provided a very pretty target. The pitch fork was a
stroke of genius. It was light and silent and stingy enough to have
his wife wriggling desperately. A fact that made it extremely
difficult to keep his mind on the job as his pants tightened around
his swelling manhood.
“It's
not my mouth I'm worried about!” she said, allowing a squeak to
escape. “That thing hurts!”
“Sush.”
Mark said. “I told you you would get spanked.” he said flicking
the plastic stick across her burning bottom several more times. “AND,
I will not tolerate you lying.”
“I'm
sorry.” she said. “I'm really really sorry. I won't give in to
her again, I promise.”
“You
better not.” he said, striping her bottom with more stinging licks.
“And...I...won't
lie.” She sobbed pitifully, when the spanking finally stopped.
“Good.”
he said. He rubbed her back soothingly, offering the comfort she
needed. When her sobs turned to hitched breaths he helped her to her
feet and pulled her into his arms.
“What
about Hanny?” she asked.
“Hanny
will be lucky to see the outside of this house by Christmas.”
Jenny
nodded. “Are you still angry?”
“No.
You're forgiven.” he said squeezing her warm, well spanked cheeks.
His bent to kiss her sweet lips and then trailed his kisses along her
jaw line and down her neck. “I do like your costume.”
Jenny
giggled. “I think you broke my pitchfork.” she said. “It's all
bent.”
He
chuckled. “I'll get you a new one. I think I like it.” He dumped
her onto the bed beside him and peeled up her tight dress enough to
hook his fingers in the thong and deftly removed it. “I KNOW I like
these but we won't be needing them.” he said. “You tricked me,
now it's time to treat me.”
Mark
smiled at his wife's sharp intake of breath as he slid into her,
pressing her stinging ass cheeks firmly into the bed. “Something to
say? He dared her.
“Happy
Halloween.”
*giggle* That was a lot of fun! I'm not going to post the answer, though, because then everyone else will be able to just write the same thing. I loved the ending, and Jenny certainly deserved every bit of what she got!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ana! Glad you liked it :)
DeleteI agree- lots of fun in that one- Love that the police were the ones to bring Hannah home.
ReplyDeleteSo glad you found it fun Mrs Soft Bottom :)
DeleteFun story, Constance. The Police brought her home.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Celeste :)
DeleteEnjoyed this story, Constance! The police showed up with Hannah.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sue. I’m glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteGreat story! I saw this coming with my own teen troubles. lol
ReplyDeleteMr. Policeman brought her home!
I think any of us with teenagers could see this as a possibility lol. Thanks Minelle :)
DeleteGreat story! The police brought their daughter home.
ReplyDeleteThank you SH. Glad you liked my story :)
DeleteNice story. It was the police.
ReplyDeletebn100candg(at)hotmail(dot)com
Thanks bn100 :)
DeleteThat was a cute ,fun, story. Hannah the daughter with a police officer.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Ann :)
DeleteA very real to life story, I enjoyed it. The policeman at the door was a surprise, I was expecting her friend.
ReplyDeleteIt could be real to life couldn’t it? LOL Glad you liked it Donnatella :)
DeleteHaha, that was fun. The police brought Hannah home. Do they really give such concessions on Halloween?
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it pao! Do they make those concessions on Hallowween? Probably not lol but as someone once said, never let the truth get in the way of a good story :P
DeleteThat would obviously be the Policeman, but you could speculate that it was Hannah herself who along with the policeman came knocking too. And poor Jenny at the top of the stairs, well the rest is spank history........
ReplyDeleteYep! Poor timing lol. I think you’d be right on both counts :)
DeleteHannah and the cop!
ReplyDeleteYou’re right! In the draw for the prize :)
DeleteThe police officer and her daughter Hannah. I really hate when my kids break me down and I let them get me into trouble. I understand and feel for poor Jenny.
ReplyDeleteI hate that too. Persistent sometimes aren’t they? LOL
DeleteMy son gets me into so much trouble! He has me wound firmly around his finger. A police officer and Hannah came to the door. The bent pitchfork may be worth the end result.
ReplyDeleteWaruwi
KIds have a way of doing that if you don’t stay on your toes lol. Plenty more pitchforks in the shops :)
DeleteHannah and the policeman came to door!
ReplyDeleteWow, did I have a strong reaction to this story. Jenny getting spanked is totally appropriate because, Mark doesn't have one child, he has two! I can't believe how she let her daughter manipulate her just so she would be liked. And then she lied and tried to keep secrets from her husband. Wow!
I know there's a lot of parents like that -- that want to be their child's friend. Children will have many friends throughout their lives but only their parents can be their mother and father. You can be their friend when they grow up. But you can't go back and parent!
Jenny should be spanked and grounded. Mark was too light on her.
Great story, Connie. I don't think I've ever rooted for a spanking as much as I did in this story.
I was rooting for a spanking too as I was writing it. I’m glad you had a strong reaction to it, at least it shows that it engaged you. I hope that’s what it meant anyway lol. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteSo tasty, my dear. I love the way you write.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alice, that means a lot! :)
DeleteLoved the story. Hannah and the policemen couldn't have arrived at a worse time.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it sunnygirl, your right, timing sucked :)
DeleteGreat story. Hannah showed up at the door with the police. Jenny definitely deserved that spanking.
ReplyDeletekesummer69(at)gmail(dot)com
Glad you enjoyed it Kelsey and you’re right Jenny did deserve that spanking :)
DeleteHannah and he police
ReplyDeletegreat story
meandi09@yahoo.com
Glad you liked it Jennifer!
DeleteHannah and police....
ReplyDeleteGreat story...
houston_switch@yahoo.com
Glad you liked it houston_switch :)
DeleteHannah and the police officer! I don't know what Jenny was thinking! Thanks for the story!
ReplyDeletesassychassy333@gmail.com
I don’t think Jenny was really thinking…well not straight anyway LOL. Thanks for reading my story Sassy :)
DeleteThe police and Hannah the bad fairy. What timing!
ReplyDeleteYep. timing was terrible! Thanks for reading and commenting Mera :)
DeleteGreat story!! Hannah and the police man showed up at the door!!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Renee! I’m up to yours next! Looking forward to it :)
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ReplyDeleteSorry for the deleted comment, Constance. Just wanted to make a cosmetic change. Great story! For my "in-character" comment see reply below.
Deleteclaire aka 1950s Wife
Hannah and the police man showed up at the door. I hope the cop at least got a leftover egg roll for not busting her.
ReplyDelete1950s Wife
and from her alter ego, claire, I love this story! Been there, done that, bought the tee-shirt, from both Hannah and her Mom's perspective (Well not the Mom's perspective at the story's end but you know what I mean.)
Hugs,
claire
LOL Glad you liked it Claire! I think we’ve all been there. :)
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