Saturday, February 2, 2013

Saturday Spankings

This is the first time I’ve done this so I hope I did it right. I’m sharing eight sentences from my new book My House, My Rules. 






Jay sighed. “If you don't just tell me Alex, I may just have to make you tell me.” He moved the table forward a fraction to give himself enough room. 

“There's obviously something wrong.” he said. “You're wound up as tight as a drum. AND you're lying about it.”

Um, what are you...why are you moving that?” Alex asked, ignoring the butterflies that had suddenly started swarming in the depths of her belly.

Making room.” Jay said trying to stop his own excitement from being too obvious. 

33 comments:

  1. "Making room" - those two words gave me a shiver!

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  2. Ooh, I like that he's excited! yummy

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  3. Just finished this book. Enjoyed it. If anyone ever deserved a spanking, Alex did.

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  4. Oh, the anticipation. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. More next week Celeste. Thank YOU for reading :)

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  5. Loved the book. Sweet story.

    Luvs, Bree

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  6. Concealing excitement and making room for the expected and perhaps a confession coming... a lot of emotion and anticipation.... Needing more now...

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  7. Nicely done! subtle - which is a good thing

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    1. LOL. I think she’s fearing for her fanny too! Thanks Patricia :)

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  9. I read quickly, and I thought, "Ooh, you're branching out into M/M!" Then I realized I missed the pronouns. :)

    Nicely done.

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  10. The lead up is always so much fun. I suspect she may know what's coming...

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  11. OOooh! I like this snippet so much! I hope that I get it for Valentine's day. ;)

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  12. "My house. My rules!" That's exactly what Hubby tells me all the time. Though he often adds "Your job to clean it and to mow the lawn." What a wise man he is!
    Excellent excerpt.

    Hugs,
    "1950s Wife" aka claire

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