Time for Saturday Spankings
Welcome to Saturday Spankings! Authors are going to present eight sentences of their spanking fiction. This week my eight sentences are from Double Trouble, the sequel to my first novella Becky’s Last Chance.
Becky and Kendall had been in the city at Kendall's Bachelorette night while their guys were away on a fishing weekend for the groom. Becky had driven home drunk and crashed her husband’s new car into Kendall and Mike’s new front gate. After having the car towed, they cooked up a story and tried to get a cab back to Kendall’s house so they would be there when the boys got home. When they couldn’t get a cab, they tried to walk, unfortunately not fast enough. They were dehydrated and tired and thought maybe they could get a lift from a car they heard coming.
The sound of a car engine was music to Kendall's ears and she stopped
in her tracks. Becky's gut forced her to turn and look. A mixture of
panic and relief washed through her and she froze, unsure of what to
do next. A quick glance at the road ahead and she admitted to herself
it was over. There was no way they could escape from an off duty cop
with a ruined gate and a pissed off husband. They were caught.
The smile slid off Kendall's face when she finally saw what Becky
saw. This wasn't an oasis in the desert. It was a whole ocean of
trouble and it was about to engulf them.
The car screeched to a sudden stop at the side of the road. First the
passenger door flew open and then the driver's.
Kendall burst into tears as Mike gathered her up in his arms.
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naughty naughty and oh-so-busted!!
ReplyDeleteYep they sure were :) Thanks Renee :)
DeleteBusted! Loved it, Constance. And it's the sequel to Becky's Last Chance. I'd say that girl is in for a world of hurt. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteDeservedly so LOL Thanks Kathryn :)
DeleteI think Kendell was smart to go for the tears first... though she will still pay. I wonder what Becky's reaction is when her man gets out of the car.
ReplyDeleteTears never hurt to water down your own panic but rarely effect the outcome lol. We might see Becky’s reaction next week. Thanks Thianna :)
DeleteBusted indeed! I'd say she's going to hear a special voice of her own...and she better be obeying quick-smart, too. Ouch!
ReplyDeleteShe’s going to be haering so much of a special voice that her ears will be ringing lol Thabnks Ana :)
DeleteYep, busted. Can see the punishment coming!
ReplyDeleteThey are busted but the boys don’t even know yet exactly what the girls got up to YET. Trouble is coming though! Thanks Cara :)
DeleteYikes! Tears won't help.
ReplyDeleteNo, tears don’t usually help but there is always a teensy bit of hope that they might lol Thanks Alyssa :)
DeleteMmm! Really dramatic little scene, and it just demands that the little madam at the centre of it is taught a lesson she won't soon forget.
ReplyDeleteAnd I know that sinking feeling in the tummy all too well ;D
I think we’ve all felt that sinking feeling...when we know the jig is finally up. Thanks Penelope :)
ReplyDeleteDrama and the unknown immediate future with a sudden stop of the car... no turning back now and the anticipation of truth-telling is just beginning....
ReplyDeleteThanks Joseph. Such an eloquent comment! Thank You :)
DeleteThat us not going to be a fun punishment when their husbands know exactly what just happened.
ReplyDeleteNo pretty safe to assume they’re in a world of trouble. Thanks Sassy :)
DeleteI remember this well....She is in so much trouble. Great build up!
ReplyDeleteThanks Minelle, for your lovely comment and for remembering :)
DeleteI can hear a Beethoven's ninth riff right now. Caught with her panties down -- well, not quite yet. :)
ReplyDeleteShe won’t be wearing her panties for long! Thanks Trish :)
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